Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Senryu

valentine gift

                                  blushed and dimpled cheeks

                                 curly and wavelike hair locks ~

                                            a valentine's gift

 

                                                 Place: 3rd

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Kim Rodrigues February 12, 2025 at 7:07 PM So sweet, Patri! Congrats! Patri Venkata Ramana February 13, 2025 at 8:48 AM Thank you so much for your compliments.

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2025 at 10:02 PM Such a cute one. Congrats Patri Venkata Ramana February 10, 2025 at 11:54 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Tania Kitchin February 9, 2025 at 12:55 PM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet senryu. Patri Venkata Ramana February 10, 2025 at 11:53 PM Thank you so much for your compliments.

CayCay Godwin February 5, 2025 at 9:59 AM Very sweet, as sweet as Valentine'day itself. A joy to read ... CayCay Patri Venkata Ramana February 5, 2025 at 9:12 PM Thank you so much for appreciating my lines.