Valentine Ellip

In your eyes I can find no disguise I can see in those eyes honesty You’re the one who by day is my sun From your glow I can feel your love flow Moon by night your light is my delight Like a quake is the love that we make Earth shatters and nothing else matters Sweet release In its wake I find peace Sleep, my dear When you wake I’ll be here Valentine I’m so glad you are mine Written FEb. 28, 2016 for the Valentine's Ellip Contest of Gigno
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:39 PM
What a darling romantic poem, Andrea. Lovely.
Kimathi Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful verse!!! ;-)
Delaney Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Congratulations Andrea: Love it....a number one for me. Love, SuZ
Laurie Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Hello Andrea ... you just keep on keeping on Andrea - good luck - Lindsay
Manassian Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Awwwww....sweet. I like it when you write about mushy love. Hugs, dear. This should do well...
Vaso Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 10:49 PM
This is really good! A fav!
Yvonne Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 6:15 PM
Wow! Amazing piece. A Fav! I posted a new piece. If I feel up to it I have another 260 to post. Over 100 motivated by an image that I will include.
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 4:38 PM
A spoonful of love with just a pinch of spice. very romantic, Andrea. Peace:)
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:32 PM
very beautiful and romantic Andrea - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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February 26, 2016 at 2:30 PM
- Lovely & sweet, Andrea - Luck in contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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