Valentine Ellip

In your eyes I can find no disguise I can see in those eyes honesty You’re the one who by day is my sun From your glow I can feel your love flow Moon by night your light is my delight Like a quake is the love that we make Earth shatters and nothing else matters Sweet release In its wake I find peace Sleep, my dear When you wake I’ll be here Valentine I’m so glad you are mine Written FEb. 28, 2016 for the Valentine's Ellip Contest of Gigno

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/15/2018 1:39:00 PM
What a darling romantic poem, Andrea. Lovely.
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Date: 3/22/2016 6:39:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful verse!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/22/2016 12:05:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea: Love it....a number one for me. Love, SuZ
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Date: 2/27/2016 11:35:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... you just keep on keeping on Andrea - good luck - Lindsay
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Date: 2/27/2016 6:13:00 AM
Awwwww....sweet. I like it when you write about mushy love. Hugs, dear. This should do well...
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Date: 2/26/2016 10:49:00 PM
This is really good! A fav!
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Date: 2/26/2016 6:15:00 PM
Wow! Amazing piece. A Fav! I posted a new piece. If I feel up to it I have another 260 to post. Over 100 motivated by an image that I will include.
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:38:00 PM
A spoonful of love with just a pinch of spice. very romantic, Andrea. Peace:)
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:32:00 PM
very beautiful and romantic Andrea - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:30:00 PM
- Lovely & sweet, Andrea - Luck in contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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