Valentine Day's Timeless Love

Having held the crystal ball of what love should see....
Beyound these commercial bouquets be roses; boxes with
Chocolate some hallmark card devised as their corporate studio
Somewhat surprized, there aren't another ninty-nine holidays 
That they can sell but give them time they'll push it, past the house 
Around her world and eighty days; crawling, through your cyber space 
Risibility is thus from a distant view swathed their babies, playing in the sand ?
Shifting, nativities his panacea's paradigm: All about her globe love gazing deeply of, lucidity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/15/2014 3:21:00 PM
Shifting, nativities his panacea's paradigm: All about her globe love gazing deeply of, lucidity. Great Line.... love that word lucidity.. :) Really good piece and I get it !! ;)
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Date: 2/14/2014 11:12:00 PM
Happy Valentines Day!
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Date: 2/14/2014 8:41:00 AM
Will you be my valentine?
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