Valentine

Valentine

My dear brothers and sisters 
What  special in Feb 14th? 
Why did you prefer a bl/\dy clothes? 
Why did you celebrate the death of  a lover?
Why do you dress nakedness on this day? 
Why do you enjoy mocking your virginity? 
You broke a door locked by thy Creator 
You behave like dogs
You exchange doggy  saliva
You are out there looking  for  wears
Which your parents  can't avoid 
They keep starving at home  because of you 
But  you  spent thousands for a single day 
You  took photos as many you want 
Your parents find it difficult  to change their clothes 
A tuition fee of  twenty thousand  
Your mathematical equation turn it to forty
When your wall is being drainage off
And your wall allowed every drowner
A fool looking for his/her val 
They romance you  such as animal
You commit sins call for  hundred lashes
And you call it pleasure 
Are you capable of account??
On the  day of  accountability...
 
©® Junaid Abdul Wakeel 11/2/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/9/2018 8:46:00 AM
Great poem Junaid..
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Date: 2/9/2018 8:35:00 AM
A very beautiful and nice written poem, I really like the message you are trying to spread via this poem, being single on this valentine, I ll totally support you, guess what, this valentine I have saved 375 dollar by being alone, I know this because my friends are going, end of joke, to be honest valentine is against religion, especially if you re a muslim( I m a muslim), and you correctly pointed out, whatever we spend will cause a fall in our parents budget and not everyone is well off
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:07:00 PM
Nice to have a comment of someone like u
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