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Image result for pictures middle aging to older women getting a box of valentine candy

Valentine

 relocation, a 
settling around the middle....
aging Valentine

holidaysenryu

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Ink Empress

February 10, 2025 at 3:13 AM

I love “ aging” valentine! So beautiful and flows in such a smooth manner . Is that you in your picture? Its a cute picture . Always a pleasure reading you! Hope the weather is treating you well! Its so hot here today. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick

February 10, 2025 at 4:16 AM

IE, thanks for the visit and nice review. No, it is not me. I am a little chubbier. LOL..Probably a few years younger but not much younger than the woman in the picture. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Valsa George

February 9, 2025 at 11:08 PM

We can be Valentines at any age..... Sara. :) Love the senryu and the image.

Sara Kendrick

February 10, 2025 at 4:14 AM

Yes, if a person truly loves someone, they love them no matter the age or health. Sometimes the love deepens. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2025 at 10:28 PM

Nice one here too

Sara Kendrick

February 10, 2025 at 4:13 AM

Thank you, Andrea. None of them for a contest. Your visits always encouraging. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

February 8, 2025 at 12:24 AM

"Aging valentine" Oh, how profound and heart-touching is that, dear Sara! Such a unique senryu and that too, so beautifully crafted with amazing choice of words. Loved reading this! Hope you've been well, missed reading your poetry while my time away from here ~ :) sending love, light and many best wishes!!

Sara Kendrick

February 8, 2025 at 6:27 AM

Thank you for the visit upon coming back on soup, Hiya. Always need best wishes. I am okay. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

February 7, 2025 at 12:11 PM

What a creative "Valentine" write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day as you write away..................

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2025 at 1:19 PM

Thank you, Paula. Not much writing going on though. Sara K

Margaret Foster

February 7, 2025 at 7:49 AM

I like this one Sara. It Says it all. Good luck . Cheers

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2025 at 1:18 PM

Margaret, I did not write this one for a contest. Thanks for the cheers. I need all I can get. Sara K

James Marshall Goff

February 7, 2025 at 7:44 AM

Happy Valentine's Sara! basket looks filled with artichokes, tomatillos or decorative ornaments?

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2025 at 1:17 PM

Well, the caption with it said a bowl of chocolates, James. It could be anything you wanted it to be. The tomatillos would be okay because they add a tomato flavor to a dish. Thanks for the visit. Sara K