Vale of Tears


Souls in fear of uncertain but rampant chaos, 
Where the cities bombed and thousands slayed, 
Houses broken and the valuable coffers emptied, 
Innocents trafficked and the felony at rise, 
Commoners conned and the power misused- 
The Almighty! Where is the peace you promised? 
For love debasing and wars right at the door,
Infected minds with greed and hatred at dispersal, 
Altruism waning and egoism the victorious devil, 
Compassion at stake and bliss only a wistful wish, 
But antipathy even amongst the esteemed bloods, 
Soulless and callous, havens blemished with vices
And enmity on the rise as the blazing fire- 
God! Where is the peace prayed for everyday?  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/9/2016 12:41:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
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Date: 10/26/2016 10:33:00 PM
wow, I am truly flattered. Thank you, Funom
Date: 2/7/2016 2:43:00 AM
KARMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:23:00 AM
I would love to... I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you
Date: 1/5/2016 3:49:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this wonderful gem. Brilliant write............A.M.
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:22:00 AM
Thank you, Afolabi.
Date: 1/4/2016 4:57:00 PM
Eloquent and expressive lines you have here, Karma. You gave poetic voice to many people's lament. Not familiar with this variation of Sonnet. Care to educate? Best regards. Kim
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:21:00 AM
Thank you for the compliments. I am truly flattered! Cheers, Karma
Date: 12/13/2015 11:44:00 AM
This is a well crafted lines, well xprezd the ills going on in many places......i would like to quote you on my website ? weldone KARMA
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Date: 12/14/2015 1:37:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Michael. Thank you
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