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Vagabond Dreams

how old are they now those that fell by the wayside, one foot in the unknown the others that disappeared to the other side of the moon why were they lost, spilling into the wind tossed upwards, cast aside, like an unrequited memory giving way like broken clouds silently dispersing into the vast, midnight sky how did we let them go… turn our backs on an exodus we don't quite recall while they took their leave without a sound, ...not an echo, nor a cry fragments may reappear weary and worn, without a name disguised by the ashes that hide the flame how often do we believe we might see them ignite rising up from the alter of youth like a sunrise from the afterlife but grasses grew unplanted sprouting out of nowhere to fill the vacant spaces we didn't know were there ____________________________________________________ 8/31/21 contest Vagabond Dreams sponsor Craig Cornish

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Date: 4/12/2024 10:30:00 AM
Excellent expressions about ambitions and dreams dear friend Carrie. It is always a joy to see your poems and reading your beautiful mind. I am aware that you are not writing after 2021 but you would always live with your sweetness with your friends. Love and best wishes for you where you are.......Ravindra
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Date: 5/19/2023 10:06:00 PM
had to come back to this because it is so different in how i feel....i just don't look back ......fascinating as Spock would say...
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Date: 12/30/2022 7:29:00 PM
What a beautiful poetic expression about what happens to our dreams as we slowly loose them while traveling life's highway, and replace them with the reality that becomes our life. I look back at those turns that have brought me here, and I'm pleased with my journey. I'm so glad to have stopped by, old friend.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 12/31/2022 7:48:00 AM
Hello Ray, How wonderful to hear from you, to remind me of the early days of Poetry Soup, and the kindness of people like yourself. Thank you for your friendship and the lovely comment! I hope you and your family are doing well! I'm seldom here, but amazed to see so many have joined, names I don't know. It was great to see an old friend!
Date: 6/8/2022 8:52:00 AM
absolutely delightful and insightful....wonderful read
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Date: 1/22/2022 8:46:00 PM
Why were they lost? Great question Carrie, so much luck needed today, so many already there, forces others down. Looking at some of my old favourite poems, some by yourself, decided to take a visit. love this poem, will join the others i've already tucked away for a rainy day...Hope you are keeping well. Harry
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Date: 12/24/2021 7:08:00 PM
Vagabond dreams are remarkably coveyed in your lyrical verse. Your final stanza is thoughtfully moving - the strong end to a very fine write. Sincerest regards. Brian
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Date: 11/7/2021 6:28:00 PM
Sweet remembrance Carrie!
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Date: 10/13/2021 12:29:00 PM
Carrie, Hello my old friend. This poem brought forth a lot of contemplation and thought. Deep and beautiful, I miss all of you, MJ
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Date: 9/21/2021 9:51:00 AM
Hello there dear poet! I know, long time no read...;)...i feel melancholic after reading this :]...but that's a reaction, we writers live for that! Great job Carrie...have a great week...much love, james
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Date: 9/13/2021 10:51:00 AM
Carrie, this is a stunning piece with a string of pondering questions and amazing imagery and word use - "fragments...without a name," "others...disappeared...to the other side of the moon," "sunrise from the afterlife." Congratulations on your win. All the best.
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Date: 9/11/2021 4:44:00 AM
Really nice Carrie....loved the last four lines of this poem.... Congrats on your win :)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/11/2021 12:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Carol! I'm honored to be in your company, and again, congrats on your winning poem!!
Date: 9/11/2021 4:25:00 AM
Beautifully written Carrie. The last stanza captures an image of emptiness....refilled...but still present.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/11/2021 12:34:00 PM
Thank you John. It was good to be part of this challenge again, after a long break :) Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: 9/10/2021 11:41:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/11/2021 12:35:00 PM
Thank you so very much!!
Date: 9/10/2021 6:27:00 PM
I'd forgotten how much I loved your poetry Carrie, congrats and welcome back dear .
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/11/2021 12:36:00 PM
And you've always been so welcoming, kind with your words, Mystic Rose! Thank you!!
Date: 9/1/2021 12:05:00 PM
nice to read your poetry again' welcome back and with a poem I believe will win
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/1/2021 2:54:00 PM
You are too kind, but thank you Frederic. It is nice to have such a nice welcome back

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