Vagabond Dreams

Amidst reality of my life two single things remain 
inflection of your voice and glow of your tender eyes 
held safe by this memory we become transparent rain       
wild as the tidal waves of Bristol souls of no disguise     
fluid as the ocean we are open inlets, giving rise  

sepia moments of a little cottage hidden in the cove 
the scent of sweet cinnamon and the taste of your clove  
the cackle sound of unseasoned wood against the brick 
we sucked the flavors of our passion, and called it love,   
holding on to each other, like flames on a candle wick 

molten wax and liquid centers with all I hold so dear   
when the moon comes into view the stars turn into glass 
willful moments arching as tender reeds adhere      
we spiral down the staircase, of God's Mandir  
we find the miracle of us, and know that it will last  


caught between two soft spots we are cloaked in silk
like two lovers in heaven or two lonesome sacred elks 
amidst the reality of my life, two single things remain 
the taste of a kiss and the place from whence we came
you my first love, were always right as rain.

August 27, 2021

Sponsor: Craig Cornish 
Contest Name: Vagabond Dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 9/24/2021 4:55:00 PM
Oh, the imagery packed a multi-layered, emotional journey for the reader. Your mind and pen traveled on paper in such a provocative splendor that I know this is a poem one could read over and over, until the lines become emotionally tenders and full emotion is poetically rendered! Loved the poem ... CayCay
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Date: 9/23/2021 9:23:00 AM
So beautiful! Every line holds enchantment. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/23/2021 3:05:00 AM
Loved your piece all the way.... Congrats, Mystic, for your well-deserved WIN! *_^
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Date: 9/20/2021 5:23:00 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your win. Beautiful romantic poem - your images are stunning, and tender like first love - "like flames on a candle wick". To my faves, Dear Poet. What an unmistakable style - this is a gem. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 9/11/2021 11:26:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/romantic~~story/write. Love your line "you my first love, were always right as rain." What a great ending. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Date: 9/11/2021 5:11:00 AM
Lovely write dear Mystic Rose Rose ....Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem :)
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Date: 9/10/2021 11:52:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this romantic and love-filled muse of yours in your poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 8/28/2021 11:43:00 AM
Such beautiful memories and moments... with lovely imagery... Enjoyed reading Mystic... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/28/2021 8:07:00 AM
So many images to ponder on, a poem infused with vagabond dreams…Delice
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/28/2021 9:42:00 AM
Thank you dear friend, have a blessed weekend :)
Date: 8/28/2021 5:18:00 AM
Sparkling in gems my friend. Wonderful memories--as sweet as first love.
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Date: 8/28/2021 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your kind offering, have a great day :)
Date: 8/28/2021 1:36:00 AM
Such a romantic poem I loved so much. I had to read it again. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/28/2021 4:05:00 AM
Thank you Victor for always being my main supporter here, it means the world to me, :)
Date: 8/28/2021 1:21:00 AM
A lovely romantic write, Mystic:)
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Date: 8/28/2021 4:05:00 AM
Thank you dear Jo, for dropping in, and reading. Delighted you commented :)
Date: 8/27/2021 8:17:00 PM
Truly one powerful romantic dream
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/28/2021 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Frederic for reading, and commenting. It means so much to me :)
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