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Vacumns and Garden Hoses

Vacumns and Garden hoses What can I say ….? Well, they are the bane of my life With their temperamental ways Both are stubborn with a mind of their own Needing to control the situation They both catch, kink and “just”stop Heightening annoyance and frustration No matter how hard i try Without success or luck To not let irritation get the better of me Preventing me yelling out F**k !!

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/20/2022 4:29:00 AM

Especially those hose kinks. :-) I identify with this poem, my friend. Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/19/2022 5:02:00 PM

Should I be cracking up! Because I can't stop laughing. Deb, do you recall when we were kids, and on a hot sizzling summer day, we trustingly drank from the garden hose? I can still taste it! Hugs .... had to come back and fave it

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/19/2022 11:37:00 AM

Oh it’s much better to shout it out Deb, or you could buy one of them unkinky hoses that expand like a man’s thingamajig, and shrivels, oh you get the idea, it just rains here constantly, so no need for the kinky stuff, enjoyed the humour, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/19/2022 8:26:00 AM

It's kinked hoses for me that turns the air blue lol. Tom

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/19/2022 6:34:00 AM

Lol! It sounds frustrating Deb. I can relate to things like this happening. You have shown us well . I hope it is straightened out now :)