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Vacuity

Yesterday saw her a bubbly girl, Standing before the mirror, That would admire and applaud, Her face wore a smile of surfeit, His love apparent in her deep eyes, That She would go nuts about , Her long silky hair touched her knees, Perfect that fatness would suffice ! But today she is standing desolate, Ripped of all her beauty and joys, Down in the dumps starved and craving, Shaken soul is inconsolable, Love that vanished as shuddered mountains, Dark clouds engulf and hues of deep blue, Emptiness constantly eats her to skeleton, Superfluous is the Vacuity in her watery eyes ! Written on 14/4/14

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Date: 4/14/2014 10:36:00 AM
This is not an epic.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/14/2014 10:40:00 AM
Thnx Greg !

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