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Vacation Paradise

My feet caressed the sand.
I walked along the magically sunlit shore.
Wanted this to never end.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 3:56 PM
Absolutely!
Gauthier Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 5:07 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Kim ~
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