Janet Eaton Poet Rhyme

Vacation

The bluest blue
The whitest white
An ocean view that gives delight

The raging winds
The crashing waves
Yet only a true sailor braves

The shining sun
The sky of blue
Your skin turns a red hue

The sandy beach
The palm trees bend
A vacation that will never end.

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Ralph Sergi April 9, 2017 at 10:41 PM I felt a special warmth from your beach poem. now I can really relate to Florida. Great Write!

Skat A May 19, 2016 at 2:42 PM Janet, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Judy Konos August 25, 2015 at 7:40 AM If anyone could say this better I would certainly like to read it! BEAUTIFUL

Poesy Relish May 10, 2015 at 12:34 AM Wow that would be perfect... hope you had a wonderful time Janet.. lov,nad

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri April 14, 2015 at 9:44 AM A wonderful beach poem and i enjoyd the mention of palm trees that we too have here on Dar beaches, it seems like God made them to be natural shades. U have sketched the imagery in attractive poetic way. Nice to read u again.

Daisy Marie Yant April 8, 2015 at 4:33 PM Hi there! So that is where you have been. Glad you enjoyed. Much Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 1, 2015 at 6:02 AM wowowoow! I wanna be there too.. :)! love the effect of your line you place me on the scene.. :)! Janet Eaton April 1, 2015 at 6:29 AM Thank you Olive for your kind words. It was a great vacation:)

Emile Pinet March 26, 2015 at 8:22 AM Very well expressed with a picturesque vision of a tropical vacation under the sun. Emile. #7 Janet Eaton March 26, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thank you Emile for such wonderful comments and for the 7:)

Fatima Nusairat March 24, 2015 at 8:38 PM Beautifully written Janet :) thank you for visiting my page and for the nice comment Appreciated Janet Eaton March 25, 2015 at 5:40 AM Thank you

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2015 at 2:14 PM a cute poem. I was expecting a joke about a sunburn at the end. But it turned into the endless vacation. I would love one of those!! Janet Eaton March 24, 2015 at 2:40 PM Thanks Andrea, I guess I could have ended with my sunburned feet that have blisters all over them, but I liked the endless vacation better, less painful:) It was an amazing experience. Janet:)