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Vacant Choice

Vacant Choice Loss is such a vacant word The hollowness of a chest An echo of a heart unheard They say its for the best A cliche believed so absurd Banned from the parental nest Sad story the abandoned bird Without the choice to contest bmdavey@10/16/17

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Date: 12/3/2017 2:27:00 PM
Very potent. Wonderful, Brian,
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/3/2017 2:52:00 PM
Thank you I appreciate your comments
Date: 10/16/2017 11:04:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, I like how you expressed this.
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/16/2017 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Arthur that means a lot coming from you

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