James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Uxorious

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       Uxorious 

You have got to be 
         joking

            I
    one to dote 

 Excessively fond
        of her 

Submissive to her 

         Ok
     I admit

 that’s my love

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Charmaine Chircop May 25, 2009 at 2:56 PM your devotion to her is extraordinally different,not romantic here,but wonderfully smart--thats your love and we love it--bravo--charma

Izzy Gumbo May 23, 2009 at 6:58 PM Love this! "Okay... I admit, that's my love" I love your 'surrender' ;)

Carolyn Devonshire May 23, 2009 at 9:15 AM Nice change of perspective here, James. I've always been the "submissive" one, but I like thinking that men can be uxorious to their wives. Very interesting poem! Love, Carolyn

Sajdah Al-Riyami May 23, 2009 at 5:01 AM i dont have alot of sarcasm in my poems but i admit im loving the sarcasm here.good job

Christopher Higgins May 23, 2009 at 4:56 AM You are a creative writer..love your mind and how it plays out in words..good job.