Utopian

i see the world getting smaller and smaller,
untill it finally fades
the taste of red wine still in my mouth, 
soothing me
knowing in the back of my mind
this place isn't been made
for you and me'
my arm hanging out the window,
my fingers playing with the wind..
fantasizing how it would be
to live this life,
completely free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 10:38 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 28, 2016 at 7:58 AM
yovanny andres, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Yovanny, thank you for sharing, enjoyed the poem. SKAT
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