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Utopia

He booked a weekend in Utopia and took a book to read; his granny said,'It's nice but very dull - a thriller's what you'll need!' written 14th November for Constance's U contest

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Date: 12/2/2021 10:03:00 AM
So it's a no thrills attached write eh. Jack That granny sounds like she's rather outrageous Though.. Liked it a lot mate.!
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Date: 11/20/2021 8:34:00 AM
Nice take, congrats Jack!!
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:53:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/15/2021 1:39:00 PM
haha. I really like where you took the theme
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Date: 11/14/2021 10:06:00 AM
Clever play on words, Jack. I think perfection could be too boring...we need to spice our life! ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 11/14/2021 8:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for all your visits. Sara
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