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Utopia

He booked a weekend in Utopia 
and took a book to read;
his granny said,'It's nice but very dull -
a thriller's what you'll need!'

written 14th November for Constance's U contest

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2021

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December 2, 2021 at 10:03 AM

So it's a no thrills attached write eh. Jack That granny sounds like she's rather outrageous Though.. Liked it a lot mate.!

November 20, 2021 at 8:34 AM

Nice take, congrats Jack!!

Constance La France

November 16, 2021 at 1:53 PM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2021 at 1:39 PM

haha. I really like where you took the theme

November 14, 2021 at 10:06 AM

Clever play on words, Jack. I think perfection could be too boring...we need to spice our life! ~ Best regards // paul

November 14, 2021 at 8:33 AM

Enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for all your visits. Sara

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