Utopia


Spellbound inside a castle of light
 Twinkling stars on tapestries outside
  Emerald horses flying in ecstasy
   Plum mulberry sunset curling in violet sunrise
    Galaxies ensnare bubbling stories at nights
     Blushing clouds flying to waterfalls of dew
      Where ancient scars dissolve into void
       And God will bless our innocent souls

This picture of heaven since I was a child
  Remained with me until I stepped outside
   The road I traverse reminds me of home
     Amid the existence I strive to create
      Splashes of peach in a tranquil courtyard
       Lyrical verses in melodies of chirping cuckoos
       Grandpa's armchair boasting as my grand throne
      Grandma brought cookies bubbling with love
     Mama's cushioned disdain entwined secret praises
   Daddy took me far into parallel universes
 Your sheepish smile at my naive questions
Wrapping me in your blanket of divine love
The stories we created under the starlit roof
 Windows reflecting Jasmine bushes swaying to bedside
  That corner behind the ancient mahogany tree
    Where leaves rattled in rain and breathed under snow
     Turned pale and crimson at our clicks of words
      On laps of dewdrops seeping scintillation of years
      Exploring distant lands to delve deep into minds
     A land I dream of cocooned with bliss
   The palatial abundance of being together
  With memories I cherish and days to celebrate
 Is nothing less than the heaven that exists
In clouds I believe afterlife will be like this.

May 24, 2020
Heaven Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Regina Riddle
Winner: Third Place

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Date: 6/6/2020 1:01:00 PM
Beautifully done, Aditi--with great imagery--I share in your hopes--congrats on your win!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 1:49:00 PM
I am so glad you relate with my words. I hope our heaven is a similar place. Thank you so much for your wonderful words of appreciation :)
Date: 6/4/2020 4:41:00 PM
Aditi This is really beautiful and very descriptive of your childhood days. Congrats on your win!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 1:55:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Krish. Childhood brings a nostalgia :)
Date: 6/2/2020 10:31:00 PM
This is quite heavenly, Aditi. Lovely tender images - as tender as the love you envision! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2020 1:08:00 AM
I am glad you loved my words Sam. Thank you so much for appreciating :)
Date: 6/2/2020 8:56:00 PM
Lovely and lively poem, dear friend. Thank you for entering and congrats on your win. You so deserve it. God bless you with many more wonderful poems that enchant and are cherished by readers. Much love and prayers sent your way, Gina
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Date: 6/3/2020 1:08:00 AM
Thank you for my placement in your contest and for your wonderful blessings and appreciation Gina. Much love :)
Date: 6/2/2020 8:46:00 PM
I call it afterlife too because our spirits live on. Your view of heaven is divine Aditi! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/3/2020 1:07:00 AM
I believe in afterlife because souls never die :) Thank you so much for your wonderful appreciation Connie.
Date: 5/26/2020 5:51:00 PM
Your descriptiveness blows me away. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:26:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Marcus. God bless you :)
Date: 5/24/2020 11:41:00 AM
Such a beautiful image of what it will be like as we step from this life into the next, Aditi. Best of luck in the contest my friend. John
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Date: 5/24/2020 12:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation John :)
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