Offor Ujunwa Poet ABC

Utmost Gift

A hollow space IT was
Out of compassion HE came
Using magic surpassing ages
Spoken words the magic was
Hollow space turned to Eden
Now behold art, yet discovered

Dust and ashes it was
Out of love he made
 Using magic undiscovered
To create keepers in his image
To guide his Eden, beautiful garden
Giving them dominion over his art

For he has the magic undiscovered
Ashes made flesh he needed not
Here we are, keepers turned rogues
Even as that, he still choose us
Behold love yet to be learn

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Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2016 at 11:18 PM Offor,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 12, 2016 at 12:41 PM Offor, well done... deeply expressed......... SKAT

Demetrios Trifiatis March 14, 2014 at 9:57 AM Penetrating to the depths of the soul! Inspiring the gates of heaven to open! Excellent work, dear offor! If you have time look at my today's poem and you will see that we speak through the same spirit! Thank you! Offor Ujunwa March 16, 2014 at 11:13 AM I will definitely take a look at your works. Thanks

Toquyen Harrell March 12, 2014 at 9:27 PM Yes. I like this, Offor. We do have a lot to learn! Hope you write again :) Offor Ujunwa March 16, 2014 at 11:13 AM Thank you

Pace Ink-U-Script March 12, 2014 at 10:24 AM Fabulous write!!!!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity May 14, 2012 at 4:21 PM i luv this.... very well written ....smiles...chiquita