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A hollow space IT was Out of compassion HE came Using magic surpassing ages Spoken words the magic was Hollow space turned to Eden Now behold art, yet discovered Dust and ashes it was Out of love he made Using magic undiscovered To create keepers in his image To guide his Eden, beautiful garden Giving them dominion over his art For he has the magic undiscovered Ashes made flesh he needed not Here we are, keepers turned rogues Even as that, he still choose us Behold love yet to be learn

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Date: 3/3/2016 11:18:00 PM
Offor,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:41:00 PM
Offor, well done... deeply expressed......... SKAT
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Date: 3/14/2014 9:57:00 AM
Penetrating to the depths of the soul! Inspiring the gates of heaven to open! Excellent work, dear offor! If you have time look at my today's poem and you will see that we speak through the same spirit! Thank you!
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Offor Ujunwa
Date: 3/16/2014 11:13:00 AM
I will definitely take a look at your works. Thanks
Date: 3/12/2014 9:27:00 PM
Yes. I like this, Offor. We do have a lot to learn! Hope you write again :)
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Offor Ujunwa
Date: 3/16/2014 11:13:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/12/2014 10:24:00 AM
Fabulous write!!!!
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Date: 5/14/2012 4:21:00 PM
i luv this.... very well written ....smiles...chiquita
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