Useless Little Words

Useless little words
Why do you mean so much?
Why did you tear so many fragile hearts?
With the pull of your lines…
With the light YANK of your unfinished sentences…
Why did you do this to me, useless little word?
Did you really want to make me cry a thousand tears?
And make me look like a fool? 
A monster? 

Useless little words,
Why are you so unfeeling? 
Why has my heart been torn by your subtle existence on a page…
Or a text, or a message… or a simple ink blot…
Fighting with all your little ways
To get right under the skin…
Why do you tear open my very veins?
My very soul?

Useless little words,
There’s a fire waiting to be quenched,
But someone is always putting in the ammunition
So quick a spurt
SO QUICK A SPURT
That the tongue has its own cruel cold stoned heart
Waiting for the moment I shatter and fall apart
Why are you so fickle?
As deadly emotions trickle

Useless little words,
I’m on my way to silence again
Because you fool me every time
With your cruel, hell-laced intentions 
Why do I even bother?
To let them bounce off my body…
They always remain

Useless little words,
Have drilled a hole straight through
Words never spoken
But always…always used…
Less and less spoken
Less and less kind

Useless little words,
I only wanted them to matter
I only wanted you to understand
That you can drill in me tonight
But tomorrow, when the day shines
You’ll leave

But only for a little while
And then you’ll be back again
Beautiful little words!
How I can always depend on you! 
To return
Unlike…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/22/2014 4:37:00 AM
This is my favorite from you. :)
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Date: 2/26/2014 11:03:00 AM
Laura... the word was AIR..I hate that this site doesn't have an edit reply button for times such as these...ugh
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Date: 2/26/2014 11:00:00 AM
Laura..Really enjoyed your thoughts on the useless little words. How ironic that it's always the ones we care about the most that toss ,them into the ai like so much nothings.
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Date: 1/15/2014 4:53:00 PM
It's the thing people say that seem so simple yet cut so deep...Nice work here. Love it as always. ~Kilmer
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Date: 1/2/2014 11:47:00 PM
I love this - useless little words - words that seek to cause torment. I like how you've differentiated it with beautiful little words and managed to turn the poem into a circle. Vey well done Laura!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/15/2014 5:31:00 PM
You've got it spot-on, Vicky! I love your comments, thanks so much. : ) ~Laura
Date: 12/29/2013 1:27:00 PM
Strange how our best friends deliver unto us the richest pain. Words are magic, and mischevious little creatures with insatiable appetites. I like how you expressed it with 'drilling'. Beautiful struggle in this write Laura. J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/29/2013 5:25:00 PM
You're reading my mind, Justin! It's kinda scary! ^_^ Thank you Justin. Thanks for the sweet visit. ~Laura
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