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Useless

I find myself in a dark place now, Somewhere with no cracks of light or open doors ...Darkness! I am falling deeper and deeper into a transparent despair, Nobody can see me. Nobody can reach me. The self destruction button of mine you pressed to hurt me It’s pushing me down further and further, And you let it. You watch it and most of all you wallow in it. You don’t need me now. And you won’t again. So I am of no use to anyone due to your adolescent ways. You succeed. You win. I.... I lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/26/2009 8:20:00 AM
Dark piece Rebecca, nicely written >> James
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Date: 10/11/2009 3:09:00 PM
Rebecca, We need you. Writers with the gift are always in short supply. Keep writing and we shall happily keep reading. Welcome to the Soup. Always, Will
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Date: 10/7/2009 7:56:00 AM
This is interesting poetry... have read it again. All the best.
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Date: 10/6/2009 6:07:00 AM
nicely penned, welcome to the soup
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Date: 10/6/2009 4:12:00 AM
Thanks everyone..Its quite scary putting these up...you never know what the response will be like!!!
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Date: 10/6/2009 3:23:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rebecca. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 5:11:00 PM
Interesting petry. All the best.
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Date: 10/5/2009 2:55:00 PM
Sad place to be. Hope it is a topic and not your life. Keep writing. Sara
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