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lying naked waiting for you to come you take what you want then leave when you’re done

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Dean Masciarelli

Date: 11/18/2009 10:03:00 AM

Hi Kat, Personally I would rather enjoy growing together with someone so that I could become there best friend and everything else in between, When I think about things like this it saddens me to think that there are many people out there in the world that can be so self centered and selfish, I would prefer being with someone who would be willing to go the distance, Thank you for sharing this with all of us even if it meant being brutally honest. Have a wonderful day, Dean

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/16/2009 12:05:00 AM

thats the world we live in today. When you get a change watch this film called, "Killing Us Softly".You can watch it on youtube.com

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/10/2009 4:12:00 PM

Short, stark and so terribly sad... perfect title, perfect piece! Love and hugs, Keith

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/10/2009 5:55:00 AM

Wow - excellent. Brief yet so powerful

Kat Crane

Date: 5/9/2009 2:04:00 PM

Don't worry, I wasn't so serious when I wrote this, and did not have anyone particular in mind, though I thank you all for your sympathetic comments. It was more a passing thought on the way people treat each other in general: perhaps not expressed very well!

Brian Anderson

Date: 5/9/2009 4:22:00 AM

by the way i was not referring to your marevouls poem, ms. crane. you are and always will be worth every letter we hacks type. love your dearest fan, brian

Brian Anderson

Date: 5/9/2009 4:19:00 AM

why is everyone so serious? lighten up, mates. you only go 'round once.

Brian Anderson

Date: 5/9/2009 4:17:00 AM

i bloody wish! lol

Alley Poe

Date: 5/6/2009 5:17:00 PM

Tough feeling to deal with. Thank you for sharing. -Alley

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/6/2009 2:29:00 PM

There are so many like this, and yet, we ask ourself why do we bother when something that can be passionate and beautiful is cheapened by their harmful intent. A power piece! Thank you for your kind comments on my work always appreciated.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/6/2009 2:26:00 PM

Sorry Kat, that one is an A--hole, not worth your time. Awesome honest write. Vince

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/6/2009 11:10:00 AM

Thorough ... witty ... superbly masterful ... all hail.