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lying naked 
waiting for you to come
you take what you want
then leave when you’re done

introspectionfree verse

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Dean Masciarelli

November 18, 2009 at 10:03 AM

Hi Kat, Personally I would rather enjoy growing together with someone so that I could become there best friend and everything else in between, When I think about things like this it saddens me to think that there are many people out there in the world that can be so self centered and selfish, I would prefer being with someone who would be willing to go the distance, Thank you for sharing this with all of us even if it meant being brutally honest. Have a wonderful day, Dean

Shirin Neshat

May 16, 2009 at 12:05 AM

thats the world we live in today. When you get a change watch this film called, "Killing Us Softly".You can watch it on youtube.com

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 10, 2009 at 4:12 PM

Short, stark and so terribly sad... perfect title, perfect piece! Love and hugs, Keith

Corinne Curcio

May 10, 2009 at 5:55 AM

Wow - excellent. Brief yet so powerful

Kat Crane

May 9, 2009 at 2:04 PM

Don't worry, I wasn't so serious when I wrote this, and did not have anyone particular in mind, though I thank you all for your sympathetic comments. It was more a passing thought on the way people treat each other in general: perhaps not expressed very well!

Brian Anderson

May 9, 2009 at 4:22 AM

by the way i was not referring to your marevouls poem, ms. crane. you are and always will be worth every letter we hacks type. love your dearest fan, brian

Brian Anderson

May 9, 2009 at 4:19 AM

why is everyone so serious? lighten up, mates. you only go 'round once.

Brian Anderson

May 9, 2009 at 4:17 AM

i bloody wish! lol

Alley Poe

May 6, 2009 at 5:17 PM

Tough feeling to deal with. Thank you for sharing. -Alley

Charlene Bird

May 6, 2009 at 2:29 PM

There are so many like this, and yet, we ask ourself why do we bother when something that can be passionate and beautiful is cheapened by their harmful intent. A power piece! Thank you for your kind comments on my work always appreciated.