Us Then

as i look down the hallway i secretly hope he will come my way but i know he wont he never does we never talk anymore we never steal glances in the middle of class not anymore we used to say someday we will be married.... now i guess he forgot about all that just another day, with tears streaming down my face screaming for someones embrace and always coming up empty

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/9/2010 5:47:00 PM

I guess I missed this little gem you have written, most here on Soup can relate to this at one tome of there lives. A well constructed piece. No love that's not about my wife, its an example of me going back to a different time and relationship, and writing from their. Sorry your still having the "block". But rest assure my dear it shall pass, you just can't force it. Hope your well my dear poet friend . With love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/22/2010 4:20:00 PM

Nice lay out with imkpressive thoughts on us then, Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2010 1:51:00 PM

sad but a very good write,..p.d.