Urn of magic potion

I fell in an urn of magic potion.
About my locus, I had no notion.
I found myself on a wide, whirly sea.
My boat had holes. From fall, I couldn't flee.

From shores I seemed to have gone far away.
Sea snakes, cone snails, sea urchins, and stingray…
From these wild creatures, how could I escape?
Perplexed, could I nestle and merely gape?

I had spent my life seeking for meaning.
Towards salvation has been my leaning.
I am moving towards life in my sail.
I feel, in my adventure, I won't fail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 1:15 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Life is an adventure. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Alex Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:04 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Fleming Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 4:26 AM
Upbeat and positive...refreshingly appealing! :) john
Alex Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:04 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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