Urban Vision

Under the blazing sun 
the dwellers in the asphalt 
    homeland 
  swelter and head home 
to cool down 
  The few clouds in the sky 
    promise no rain
The urban masses reach for peace
Taste summer in their very bones
The old and the young 
    yearn for relief 
Late afternoon morphs 
   into memory 
  Auto lights turn on , streetlights 
cut through shadow 
  with a thousand splinters of light 
Eyes peer out from a thousand 
  rooms
As the blazing sun is
   replace by a full moon
  lovers embrace 
weary workers head out for 
   cold beer 
A thousand times a thousand sighs
    can be heard
The urban masses have their 
   own hopes 
Fufillment may come later 
   before the cycle of 
night and day 
  is completed once more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 24, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Hello Matt, nice hearing from you,, And by the way I think Deborah, got a typo,on her comment. I think she meant (BLOG) not (BLOCK) well anyways about your poem, and the setting of the tranquility of the open life. The space to soar sounds great with the fun that can be enjoyed under the Urban vision, Enjoyed your poem, and have a wonderful blessed Thanksgiving day,. always,..P.D.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:20 PM
So many people in the world with their own little hopes and dreams, what you captured with this one, Matt (read it over carefully, I think I saw 2 or 3 typos) Anyway, GREAT writing. LUv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 9:44 AM
I love how it meandered down the page typo line 1 Matt "under", Please comment on my block? Light & Love
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August 4, 2010 at 9:08 AM
It's been many years since I lived in a city, Matthew, but your words surely recreated the images I recall. Very nicely written! Love, Carolyn
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