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The boy just lay there
    eyes dulled, vacant stare
 
  Needles spread all about
    another sprout, its life snuffed out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:54 PM
I lived that life, once upon a time. I wish I had listened to my dad. "You can't miss, what you never try" Luckily I survived. Great to read you again, old friend. I hope all is well with you.
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 7:17 PM
Yeah. Dads aren't so dumb after all, I guess. lol... As for myself, I'm amazed I'm alive sometimes. Great to see your avatar. Thanks for reading my stuff. Light and Levity, Gershon
Bauer Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:03 PM
so sad, gershon, but well said...
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Ilene. Here's to a good week for you! :) gw
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 3:20 PM
from an instant of relief to an eternity....
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:17 PM
That about sums it up, John.
Romios Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Awesome, GW, anyone can write about this, but not with the clarity and the brevity, and depth I so admire. Most happy yo fave your outstanding intelligence.. Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:08 PM
You are so kind to me, Pangie. It's overwhelming. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Hugs, Gershon
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 10:30 AM
So sad this path was taken - but this happens within all levels of society, whether rich or poor and whatever culture creed or nation, this unfortunate situation is forever present and is, getting worse daily as the numbers rise. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:15 PM
Worse and worse, at least here in America.
Sands Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 8:04 AM
So sad and true. It is happening a lot. Take care :)
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Too much, too often, and too frequently met with a shrug of the shoulders.
Hawkins Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 12:45 AM
So very sad.
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Sad, sad, sad, and becoming sadder, unfortunately.
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