Urban Beats

Urban beats pound inside my car
The sound quality crisp and clear
People have gathered at the bar
Urban beats pound inside my car
Listen here, whomever you are
The sound drops harder from the rear
Urban beats pound inside my car
The sound quality crisp and clear



Triolet:
(rhyme scheme ABaAabAB)
JP.....9/28/06
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 28, 2010 at 10:34 PM
Turn it down sweetie so you won't hurt your ears, lol Wonderful poem. I love the Triolet. Scarlett
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October 18, 2009 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured!! ~Trudy~
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October 12, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Jared - kool piece >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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October 12, 2009 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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October 12, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Jared.Rgds Brian
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October 5, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Nicely put together. Not sure about the urban beats pound my car sounds loud. Keep writing. Sara
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July 9, 2009 at 8:19 AM
towering my taste to do more work!hehe nice beat!
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July 5, 2009 at 2:31 PM
Kool write>>James
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