Jared Pickett Poet I do not know?

Ur Girl

Is that your girl, staring at me?
Taunting me,
Teasing me at the job?
Is that your girl, listening to me?
Eyes glistening while I read
Tempting me, 
inspiring me,
To my pressure she may concede.

Is that your girl, spending time with me?
Shouldn't she be with you?
Why is your girl grinding on me,
while you sit home alone, all blue?
is this your girl, wanting me?
Thinking of me when she's with you.

I did nothing, but be me
Why are you in my face?
Why is your girl wanting me?
Dancing on me, 
don't hate.


Jared Pickett
9/21/09
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Jiril Clemons March 15, 2014 at 9:15 PM Play on, Jared! Play on through your poetic charm. Great poem. Smooth flow through this piece. Enjoyable overall.

Debbie Guzzi October 5, 2009 at 3:06 PM do the right thing ;) Light & Love

John Freeman September 22, 2009 at 10:22 AM Lot of that going on Jared, could just be a variety infatuation going on here. Smile, Good expressions of facts, man! Sincerely Moses

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2009 at 7:38 AM This girl obviously is not getting the satisfaction she needs at home. Perhaps if her mate paid a little more attention to her, she would not be "dancing on" you! Excellent write as always, Jared. It was entrancing, thinking of each scene playing out. (You must be one very attractive and alluring fella!) Love you! Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown September 22, 2009 at 5:32 AM Oh my goodness what is a man to do. Excellent writing Jared. Love, Carol

James Fraser September 22, 2009 at 4:18 AM Kool poem Jared, Soup Mail>>James

Ashe Kristy De La Keur Scoville September 22, 2009 at 2:27 AM Well he should have paid attention to his woman huh? Nice write and thanks as always for comments you give....The Southern Belle

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2009 at 1:53 AM Some have and some don't and if you do you just can't help it can ye. Nicely done good job. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

Charmaine Chircop September 21, 2009 at 9:36 PM this write is very sweet,a pleasure to read--Charma:)