Ur Girl

Is that your girl, staring at me?
Taunting me,
Teasing me at the job?
Is that your girl, listening to me?
Eyes glistening while I read
Tempting me, 
inspiring me,
To my pressure she may concede.

Is that your girl, spending time with me?
Shouldn't she be with you?
Why is your girl grinding on me,
while you sit home alone, all blue?
is this your girl, wanting me?
Thinking of me when she's with you.

I did nothing, but be me
Why are you in my face?
Why is your girl wanting me?
Dancing on me, 
don't hate.


Jared Pickett
9/21/09
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Jiril Clemons

Date: 3/15/2014 9:15:00 PM

Play on, Jared! Play on through your poetic charm. Great poem. Smooth flow through this piece. Enjoyable overall.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/5/2009 3:06:00 PM

do the right thing ;) Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 9/22/2009 10:22:00 AM

Lot of that going on Jared, could just be a variety infatuation going on here. Smile, Good expressions of facts, man! Sincerely Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2009 7:38:00 AM

This girl obviously is not getting the satisfaction she needs at home. Perhaps if her mate paid a little more attention to her, she would not be "dancing on" you! Excellent write as always, Jared. It was entrancing, thinking of each scene playing out. (You must be one very attractive and alluring fella!) Love you! Carolyn