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Upside Down In the Universe

Reeling Feet skipping Over black holes Racing Deflecting time Searching for answers Clues From spirits gone From spirits waiting Tumbling Forward and backward Seeking Peace Within 09/10/13 © All Rights Reserved

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2013 6:45:00 AM

Great one, James..Enjoyed reading this one today..Some of us seek that peace that flows like a quiet river..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2013 12:39:00 PM

- Like a carousel ....slightly up and slightly down...it never stops ... - Well written Jimbo ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 9/12/2013 5:40:00 AM

Short but wordful. No wasted word.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2013 10:59:00 AM

roller coaster in a maze of life , jimbo... love the feel of this rockin' piece... awesome!..:) huggs