Upside Down In the Universe

Reeling

         Feet skipping

                     Over black holes

Racing

           Deflecting time

   Searching for answers

 Clues

            From spirits gone

 From spirits waiting

Tumbling

             Forward and backward

Seeking
Peace
Within



09/10/13
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Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 6:45 AM
Great one, James..Enjoyed reading this one today..Some of us seek that peace that flows like a quiet river..Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 12:39 PM
- Like a carousel ....slightly up and slightly down...it never stops ... - Well written Jimbo ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 5:40 AM
Short but wordful. No wasted word.
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 10:59 AM
roller coaster in a maze of life , jimbo... love the feel of this rockin' piece... awesome!..:) huggs
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