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Upset Husband

Daily bedroom cleaning
His chamber pot is quite full 
WHERE’S!!!!! MY CHAMBER POT !

By eve roper 10/23/2014

funlight verse

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 26, 2014 at 4:27 AM

I see the poem from a different perspective. You have that strength to make fun of a otherwise disgusting side of daily living. You have used the word "upset". You have indicated your husband's mental and emotional distress. This is the brightest side of your personality. Thanks my young lady, love----rajat

Eve Roper

October 26, 2014 at 8:20 AM

Thank you Rajat, yes, some household shores are disgusting, but one has to do it or it doesn’t get done, so we do it with a smile and act nothing of it. :) Thank you once more for the sweet kind words, loves and hugs eve

Cherl Dunn

October 24, 2014 at 7:01 PM

Dear Eve this is very interesting, I can see why he would be upset, but it's not easy to take care of someone like this, I know I took care of my parents when they got this ill, I feel your pain here, I'm glad you enjoy my work, my Halloween feast is almost over and then on to Thanksgiving, and christmas, cheri

Eve Roper

October 24, 2014 at 8:51 PM

Oh Cherl, please don't remind me all so close and not ready for any of it. I have been sharing your writings with my husband we both agree they are very well done. Love and hugs eve

Dan Helppi

October 24, 2014 at 4:17 PM

This poem makes me think on how my sweet wife puts up with me!

Eve Roper

October 24, 2014 at 4:57 PM

Wife’s are special in some cases, I am tickled it made you think of your wife :) eve

Richard Lamoureux

October 24, 2014 at 1:18 PM

Fortunately we are all not so helpless. This was funny!

Eve Roper

October 24, 2014 at 2:58 PM

Thank you Richard, I am glad you enjoyed :) eve

Liam Mcdaid

October 24, 2014 at 9:15 AM

smiling eve beautifully penned piece

Eve Roper

October 24, 2014 at 9:33 AM

Thank you lian, for your visit and your smile. I was thinking of my grandfather that had 5 oil wells on his land in La Gloria Texas, with an outhouse outside and still used a can under his bed. Didn’t install a bathroom until I was in my 20's. :) eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 24, 2014 at 7:00 AM

- Men are bad at looking for things ..... easier that the wife puts things in front his eyes - Well done, Eve - :))) - Let him empty and wash the pot himself :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 24, 2014 at 12:46 PM

- Yes, I understood that it was a pee pot :)))

Eve Roper

October 24, 2014 at 8:29 AM

Thank you Anne Lise, this old man of mine does depend on his wife for everything in which I don't mine I guess it’s my background, but I told this poem to my 31 year old son and he asked, “ What’s a chamber pot”., so I guess I should have been more specific that it was a pee pot

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