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Ups and Downs

Smiles for fun cuddly pets falling in love small children trying things for the first time When I see someone treated unfairly war and hunger unshed tears make me frown "First Place" win ! Written by: Shani Fassbender for the contest: "Smiles and Frowns" Form: Tetractys

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Shani. Love, Carol

Afroze Ali

Date: 7/24/2011 12:01:00 PM

you summed it up so well. Congratulations!

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 10:02:00 AM

congrats on your win, David

Amanda Moore

Date: 7/24/2011 12:19:00 AM

this is adorable congrats on you win!!!

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/23/2011 9:49:00 PM

GREAT WIN! CONGRATULATIONS !!! no doubt about the victory. .well-deserved. . .*-* smile . . .junjun *-*

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 3:16:00 PM

Congrats Shani on your first place win ..with such a delightful write ..so happy to be sharing top spot with u also luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 11:22:00 AM

you took the path of many things to discuss and it served you well. These are truly the things that make us smile and frown, Shani, a poem everyone with a heart can relate to! Congrats on top win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 10:46:00 AM

My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Michael, Shani

Lee Ramage

Date: 7/23/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win. Lee

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/20/2011 3:24:00 PM

The same things that make you happy and sad are the things that make me feel the same way, Shani. A lovely poem for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn