Line Gauthier Poet Couplet

Ups and Downs

I remember the sun shining bright
I remember the world seeming right

I remember ominous clouds of grey
I remember the illusion melting away



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2021

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Charles Messina July 3, 2019 at 7:03 AM This is a great couplet. Like Michael below said. So much in so little words. Hugs Charlie :) Line Gauthier July 3, 2019 at 10:21 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Charles.

Michael Craig July 2, 2019 at 10:56 AM You say so much in just a few words. Such talent shows in the words you chose. Line Gauthier July 2, 2019 at 11:51 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michael.

Caren Krutsinger July 2, 2019 at 7:06 AM Amazingly, one grey cloud changes everything. Like your metaphor my friend. Line Gauthier July 2, 2019 at 7:07 AM So true, Caren. Thanks for your visit and comment.