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Ups and Downs

I remember the sun shining bright I remember the world seeming right I remember ominous clouds of grey I remember the illusion melting away Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on July 1, 2019

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Charles Messina

Date: 7/3/2019 7:03:00 AM

This is a great couplet. Like Michael below said. So much in so little words. Hugs Charlie :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/3/2019 10:21:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Charles.

Michael Craig

Date: 7/2/2019 10:56:00 AM

You say so much in just a few words. Such talent shows in the words you chose.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2019 11:51:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michael.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/2/2019 7:06:00 AM

Amazingly, one grey cloud changes everything. Like your metaphor my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2019 7:07:00 AM

So true, Caren. Thanks for your visit and comment.