Uprush

"Give me coffee and no one gets hurt" Jim Davis's Garfield, the cat I just woke up; it’s coffee time. I’ve craved strong brew for fifty years. With flavored creamer—Umm, sublime! I just woke; it’s coffee time. I’d lose my rhythm and my rhyme without this serum that endears. I just woke up; it’s coffee time. I’ve craved strong brew for fifty years. November 1, 2022 for the Writing Challenge--Unburden a "U" Word--Poetry Contest Placed 2nd Sponsor: Constance LaFrance

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/30/2022 9:54:00 AM

Congratulations, Janice especially now that I have had my morning infusion of caffeine and world is no longer blurry! This poem is so delightful and resonates with so many of us! I didn't realize that Mountain Dew had so much caffeine! Hope you are having a great morning. Blessings for your day and for this beautiful season!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2022 7:32:00 AM

Back with congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Isn't the coffee delicious. Sara

Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/18/2022 8:18:00 AM

Sara, thanks a million! Janice

Constance La France

Date: 11/14/2022 6:24:00 AM

Janice, I really like your fun poem and the quote is delightful and too funny. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/18/2022 8:20:00 AM

Constance , thank you SO much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice

Terry Miller

Date: 11/13/2022 8:05:00 AM

Coffee time, sublime; congratulations on a fine win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2022 3:41:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I always liked to read Garfield. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/9/2022 6:49:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sara. Janice

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/3/2022 10:53:00 AM

Don't talk to me until I've had my morning ration of caffeine! Though not a coffee drinker, tea also does the trick! As Snoopy says: "I think I'm allergic to morning!" Truly Garfield is the sage of our age with his lasagna obsession (me too!) and his demand for the morning elixir of life! This humorous gem is pure am delight Janice. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/3/2022 2:25:00 PM

Sam, thank you for this great response. Mountain Dew has quite a bit of caffeine--for those who don't love coffee OR tea. I agree with your praise of Garfield! Janice

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/2/2022 9:45:00 AM

Yep, me, too, Janice. I used to carry my coffee cup with me all day long. I learned the dangers of excessive caffeine the hard way.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/2/2022 11:04:00 AM

Yes, lots of caffeine m-makes sooome people j-j-jittery~~~but NOT ME. Thanks, Milton. Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/2/2022 5:59:00 AM

Very apt form your chose for this expression: I just woke up; it’s coffee time...The repeating line conveys the urge!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/2/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice