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Upon a Small Stage

Upon A Small Stage

Upon a small stage
I dance my crimson silks swaying
with the studied movements of love.
about my ankles rose gold bells chime in rhythm

I dance my crimson silks swaying
as scents of sandalwood perfume the air
about my ankles rose gold bells chime in rhythm
My heart trembles at your look.

As scents of sandalwood perfumes the air
night crowds close about the fire
My heart trembles at your look
I grow weak with wanting you

Night crowds close about the fire
With the studied movements of love
I grow weak with wanting you
Upon a small stage.

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Date: 11/21/2017 8:12:00 AM
What an excellent second stanza, I really like how you create your images via poetry.. Well expressed Patricia..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/21/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thank you i think I must be a frustrated artist; the rest of the family are artists.
Date: 11/21/2017 7:42:00 AM
This is well written, Patricia:)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/21/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 11/21/2017 7:37:00 AM
I loved reading this poem--very artistic and poetic--feelings well expressed!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/21/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Vijay i can still hear the music in my mind.
Date: 11/20/2017 6:21:00 PM
This reads like an old classic, very expressive and beautifully written. I love your poetry, kind regards, Kevin x
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Kevin it is kind of you to say so. Thank you for commenting as well.
Date: 11/20/2017 6:05:00 PM
No doubt about it, you are in love.This how i see your poetry. i enjoyed this poem.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 6:43:00 PM
Tettering is more like it but you are right. Thank you Darlene.

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