Upon a Bed of Petals

Upon a Bed of Petals

upon a bed 
of petals, lay ye down
ambrosia lent
filling the senses
in pungent resistance

the unfurled rose
petals stripped in turn
a lovers gift
with heavenly soft scent
permeates the room

 @ 4/3/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thirtyseven Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 9:08 PM
The romance drips from every word. Very nice. Look forward to more in 2014.
Neels Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:37 AM
A beauty thats for sure, I enjoyed this Debra, hope you are doing good :) Wilma
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Wow...gorgeous....
Sivey Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 7:54 AM
This is a very romantic write, something that I love deep in my heart! You have delighted me with this incredible poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this masterful piece this morning! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
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