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Upon a Bed of Petals

Upon a Bed of Petals upon a bed of petals, lay ye down ambrosia lent filling the senses in pungent resistance the unfurled rose petals stripped in turn a lovers gift with heavenly soft scent permeates the room @ 4/3/2013

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/1/2014 9:08:00 PM

The romance drips from every word. Very nice. Look forward to more in 2014.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/7/2013 11:37:00 AM

A beauty thats for sure, I enjoyed this Debra, hope you are doing good :) Wilma

Donna Jones

Date: 4/3/2013 1:16:00 PM

Wow...gorgeous....

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/3/2013 7:54:00 AM

This is a very romantic write, something that I love deep in my heart! You have delighted me with this incredible poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this masterful piece this morning! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!