Kurt Ravidas Poet Rhyme

Uplifting Feelings

When I uplift my Feeling
(that’s his name),
he’s cursing me and squealing.
What a shame
to uplift feelings! Feeling
hates I feel
like lifting feelings up
against their will.

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Gershon Wolf May 19, 2019 at 4:55 PM Let freedom ring! Free will for Feelings! Forever. This write is truly hilarious, Kurt. ochen cmesh'no! Ochen! ~ gw Kurt Ravidas May 20, 2019 at 6:20 AM Harasho, spasiba)

Connie Marcum Wong May 18, 2019 at 1:21 PM I've been doing a lot of that lately. Made me smile. ; ) Kurt Ravidas May 18, 2019 at 2:51 PM Thank you, Connie. Manking you smile! What could be better?)

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2019 at 12:37 PM I agree with Caren. A funny ending this has, Kurt! Kurt Ravidas May 18, 2019 at 2:49 PM Thank you, Andrea)

Caren Krutsinger May 17, 2019 at 7:38 PM Your feelings are squealing, their truth they be dealing. They are not ready for healing. So challenging, your feelings! This is so funny especially the ending! Kurt Ravidas May 18, 2019 at 2:49 PM Thank you, Caren. I like I could cheer you up)