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Life is inherently difficult. It is its cornerstone Awakened, striving to tie up all wear and tears Respect you've given, the kindness you've shown Will still offer me vigor and be my exulting gear? Awakened, striving to tie up all wear and tears To be truly human, fully conscious, and awake Will still offer me vigor and be my exulting gear? Feud grew fray, brother with brother, and no spake. To be truly human, fully conscious, and awake Oblivious to what Dramatis personae uttered; Feud grew fray, brother with brother, and no spake Will be thrown out of the nest in a steady world? Oblivious to what Dramatis personae uttered; Must live each time, as if it were at the beginning Will be thrown out of the nest in a steady world? Facing life head-on lessens our ought-clinging. Must live each time, as if it were at the beginning Respect you've given, the kindness you've shown Facing life head-on lessens our ought-clinging Life is inherently difficult. It is its cornerstone. Written: December 08, 2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 22 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney

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Date: 12/8/2022 4:39:00 PM
The way you laid out the trials and tribulations of life sounded profound, and yet done with subtle yet distinct provocative lines. This is a very difficult category to excel in, but you made it sound so convincingly smooth and easy. Great effort Lasaad!...ab
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