Emile Pinet Poet Triolet

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Up To the Gods

A chance to play the cards life dealt
you hope for once to beat the odds.
Your heart says yes; because it felt
a chance to play the cards life dealt.
You knew a dream, like ice, could melt,
and so it was up to the Gods.
A chance to play the cards life dealt,
you hope, for once, to beat the odds.


(Triolet)


12/31/2022


Judged 1/28/2023
N/A in Chance Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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P.S. Awtry January 8, 2023 at 9:08 PM Whoa, Emile you have done something magnificent with this theme. Reads like a winner to me. Emile Pinet January 9, 2023 at 7:12 AM Thanks, P.S., I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2023 at 12:30 PM Love this. I bet it could be a winner, Emile. Emile Pinet January 1, 2023 at 12:53 PM Thanks, Andrea, your comments are always so encouraging my friend, Emile.

Joanna Daniel January 1, 2023 at 4:36 AM Excellent triolet, Emile:) happy new year to you and yours! Emile Pinet January 1, 2023 at 8:30 AM Thanks, Jo, as always I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.