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Up The Aisle

Jenny realised on her big day
Walking down the aisle
She was still in love with Ray
It was a hot day in May
The Groom was heard to say
The best man didn’t hear a thing 
He just kept touching the ring
The Priest was a worldly Joe
But even he didn’t know
The events to take place
When the bride began to slow
The Groom turned to see
His wife to be
Rose-coloured eyes
Just blinded the disguise
The Priest looked at the best man
Guilt written in bold
He had this awful feeling
How this was going to unfold
The bride stopped and turned around
Headed for the door
Never glancing back
This time she was sure
Ray touched the ring for the final time
Passing it to the Groom
Walking up the aisle
Totally over the moon.

The Groom was in total shock
The Priest stood bemused
The best man's girlfriend
Realised she had been used.

They met outside
Love was in the air
Or would have been
Had the girlfriend not shot the pair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 11/25/2024 11:29:00 AM
Great flow to this poem.. you are a great storyteller.
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/25/2024 11:52:00 AM
Was a sad day, the free drink got cancelled, gutted.
Date: 11/25/2024 5:01:00 AM
Lolol gosh! Weddings can be quite entertaining hey, this one surely is. You always write such fun poems and this is no exception i enjoyed reading this. I personally dont like weddings lol Sending you light always
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/25/2024 11:21:00 AM
You wonder why couples put themselves through the trauma. Divorce parties are popular now. lol

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