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Up The Aisle

Jenny realised on her big day Walking down the aisle She was still in love with Ray It was a hot day in May The Groom was heard to say The best man didn’t hear a thing He just kept touching the ring The Priest was a worldly Joe But even he didn’t know The events to take place When the bride began to slow The Groom turned to see His wife to be Rose-coloured eyes Just blinded the disguise The Priest looked at the best man Guilt written in bold He had this awful feeling How this was going to unfold The bride stopped and turned around Headed for the door Never glancing back This time she was sure Ray touched the ring for the final time Passing it to the Groom Walking up the aisle Totally over the moon. The Groom was in total shock The Priest stood bemused The best man's girlfriend Realised she had been used. They met outside Love was in the air Or would have been Had the girlfriend not shot the pair.

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Date: 11/25/2024 11:29:00 AM
Great flow to this poem.. you are a great storyteller.
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/25/2024 11:52:00 AM
Was a sad day, the free drink got cancelled, gutted.
Date: 11/25/2024 8:33:00 AM
So many big moments she could have chosen to take the shot - I feel outside the church was a kindness of sorts, although I'm not keen on people who clog up exits. I hope any Nana's were spared the scene via a side door...
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/25/2024 11:27:00 AM
You can't be shooting people in a house of God. Well, not on this site, you'll get struck down. Clogging up exits is not good. Nana's were not sure what day it was, but food was provided, and they were happy. lol
Date: 11/25/2024 5:01:00 AM
Lolol gosh! Weddings can be quite entertaining hey, this one surely is. You always write such fun poems and this is no exception i enjoyed reading this. I personally dont like weddings lol Sending you light always
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/25/2024 11:21:00 AM
You wonder why couples put themselves through the trauma. Divorce parties are popular now. lol

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