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Up in Smoke

Our ceiling fan went up in smoke
But didn’t catch on fire.
It seemed okay before it broke;
The culprit was a wire.

It happened fast and we got scared;
My husband flipped the fuses.
I guess we’re never quite prepared
When we’re whom bad luck chooses.

The burning smell took hours to fade;
A new fan will replace it
With safer bulbs, yet I’m afraid
I might not quite embrace it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Dear Ilene, your recount of the ceiling fan mishap is both humorous and relatable. Despite the scare, your witty portrayal of the situation brings light to the unexpected twists of life. I love how your resilience shines through as you face the aftermath, cautiously preparing for what comes next. May the new fan bring not only cool breezes but also peace of mind, knowing you've taken steps towards safety. - Blessings, Daniel
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March 27, 2024 at 5:04 PM
It’s a weird thing, Ilene. I’m quite comfortable with electrics. Not much I wouldn’t have a go at. Yet for years, if I replaced a popped lightbulb, I would look away when I first switched it on… in case it exploded. I say that’s weird because one never did explode… hmmm… maybe it’s me that’s weird! Enjoyed
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