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Up In Smoke

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Smoke billows up as loss expunged to ashes that crumble and crackle in the flickering flames that lick up all that is left. The smoke streaks the sky with streamers heralding the loss of hope and dreams in puffs and swirls skyward.

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Date: 1/28/2022 7:58:00 AM
A succinct yet powerful piece, John:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 1/26/2022 8:30:00 AM
Your title," Up in Smoke" is so fitting~ your imagery paints a picture of devastating loss. Well done. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. :) Paulette
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Date: 1/25/2022 7:59:00 PM
"the loss of hope and dreams in puffs and swirls skyward" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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