Up In Smoke

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time marches forward
reality's fire consumes-
dreams go up in smoke

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Poet's notes:
Here's the link to my book Up In Smoke.
It's a work in progress :)

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 6/18/2018 8:15:00 PM

Sad, but true. Up in Smoke, where can I find your collections of poems????

Mark Toney
Date: 6/18/2018 8:36:00 PM

Barbara, just click on the "Up In Smoke" book cover above.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 5/31/2018 7:56:00 PM

So true of words told for a possible experience.

Mark Toney
Date: 5/31/2018 8:35:00 PM

Many experience such as they grow older. Thank you for your comment, Ronald.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/26/2018 5:39:00 PM

It's a race against time...make it real or another's reality will be your real... Nice...

Mark Toney
Date: 4/26/2018 6:13:00 PM

Arturo, you are a unique poet and a gracious soul. Your comment is much appreciated.

Up In Smoke

time marches forward reality's fire consumes- dreams go up in smoke

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time marches forward
reality's fire consumes-
dreams go up in smoke