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Fire Walk with Me: Manifesting with the Aries New Moon — The Hoodwitch

- Up In Flames -

A silence without words
no rhyme or verse
The mesmerizing power of the voice
through lyric and lullaby
The feeling that stings in the stomach
White paper and black ink are
engulfed by the flames
Thoughts, sorrow and joy
while, hands resting calmly in the lap
The good dreams are shattered

My soul is crumbling in grief
Like a restless and hungry animal 
isolated, unbalanced and lost
Influenced by the words,
the weeping lump begins to grow in the throat
The eyes are red and swollen  ... a fiery blow
But I know ... someday
everything will start over again

Those who remain on stage, are left in a meditative state
Away from the light of the morning and rainbow color spectrum
The brain never stops being thirsty ... with wonder and surprise
Give us some nourishment ... for dreams and the imagination
Room for humor - room for seriousness ... I love poetry






20/01/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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If there was no Poetry 
Sponsored by: Silent One

1st place in the contest

Poem Of The Day : 22/01/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Knowlton Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Great poem sunshine…I gave up hunting for poetry and can`t imagine a world without it…Plus paper and pencil is cheaper than bullets.
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 12:27 PM
- Many thanks, Charlie :) - Enjoy your weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Sunshine. Well penned.
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:37 PM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Lovely poem Annelise and congratulations on your well deserved win. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 3:08 AM
- Many thanks Phyllis, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 11:50 AM
The imagery is wonderful. Congratulations on your first place win!
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:11 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Agustin Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. I'm delighted with your last lines: "Give us some nourishment ... for dreams and the imagination Room for humor - room for seriousness ... I love poetry." God bless you. Thanks likewise for your comments for my poems.
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:10 AM
- Many thanks Beata, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 12:54 PM
A poem that grows in strength as it progresses-- love the 2nd stanza--congrats!
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:09 AM
- Many thanks L.J., for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Back with congrats Anne-Lise on your first place win.
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:08 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Excellent poem Anne-Lise, congrats. :)
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:08 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, back again :) Congratulations again (lol) on your win! Hugs // Charlie :)
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 3:02 AM
- Many thanks again for your visit and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 6:31 AM
congratulations on your top win Anne-Lise... hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 3:01 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 5:14 AM
There is a time for the pen to remain silent, but most of the time you have to let that ink flow... great poem for the contest.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. I see congrats for POTD also..
Mcdaid Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:08 PM
your pen is burning beautifully in this painted piece passing you a warm smile wishing you a blessed weekend dear friend
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:17 PM
- Hi Liam, so nice to see you ... many thanks for your lovely comment :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Hello Sunshine smile a fire can do a lot of damage. it is horrilbe to happen to anybody. have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene.
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 1:06 PM
- Many thanks, Darlene :) - Enjoy your weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Much emotion! Congrats on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 12:44 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 5:13 AM
You are Poetry...Congratulations on POTD...All the best for 2020
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 12:43 PM
- Many thanks Arturo, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 3:10 PM
Poetry is the consistent healer of our emotions. You have expressed this beautifully Anne-Lise. You are in my prayers my dear friend. Blessings for poetry to be that healing balm needed. Congratulations on your deserving POTD honor! Love, Connie xxoo
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 12:43 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comments, congratulations and visits on my poem, dear Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 1:53 AM
Hi my dear friend Anne-Lise - congratulations on this wonderful poem been chosen as POTD, Love and hugs, Jenny.
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:10 AM
- Many thanks my friend Jenny, for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Happy to see this make POTD :) Back to say...Congratulations, Anne-Lise. Hugs Charlie
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:10 AM
- Thanks for returning and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 6:43 PM
nicely done, Sunshine, congratulations on POTD. hugs eve
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:09 AM
- Many thanks Eve, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 5:10 PM
I like this, well done.
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:09 AM
- Many thanks, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 5:06 PM
back to say congratulations on your POTD...hugs my friend :)
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 4:49 AM
- Thanks for returning and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. A wonderful write. We all need poems........
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 4:47 AM
- Many thanks Paula, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:18 PM
yes, indeed - & the last line speaks for us all
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 4:48 AM
- Many thanks, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Congrats on POTD Ann, very nicely rendered..
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 4:47 AM
- Many thanks Joseph, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nicole Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:40 PM
"If there was no Poetry" Oh my, that could never be- as there will always be words upon the heart, emotions touching the soul. Even in silent moments, a melody lingers within. Paper and ink aren't needed- Poetry can create a life all on its own. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Nicole Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 3:22 PM
True. :) When poems are born in bed- it's best to write them down- as soon as you can. Hugs, Brandy
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:01 PM
- ... sometimes paper and ink are needed, Brandy ... many poems are born in bed :) - Many thanks for congratulations and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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