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Up and Down We Go

Travel
Does not change theme
Up and down, we go far
Coming back from where we began
Need Map


©Holly P. Moore
   December 2012

funnyintrospectionlifecinquain

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Harry Horsman

December 18, 2012 at 2:58 PM

a sense of direction, we all need, well written poetry like this too...

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2012 at 10:33 AM

I really like this one too. I just adore a well written succinct poem.

Vicky Tsiluma

December 16, 2012 at 8:53 AM

I like this! The part of not changing theme is thought provoking - sometimes in life we move to other places claiming a change of scene but what we're really doing is running away from ourselves. Nicely penned!

David Williams

December 16, 2012 at 7:26 AM

Holly oh been there many a time, I like this a lot...David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 16, 2012 at 3:32 AM

Yes I like this and I think the change of title is a good idea this works, no matter how far we think we go sometimes we seem to end up back where we started sometimes a little direction is a good idea xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 15, 2012 at 2:21 PM

That could've been me .... I have no sense of location .... lol Well written dear Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 15, 2012 at 1:27 PM

Hi Holly love, this is good but I think you may be a line short for a Cinquain, have a look and let me know if I am wrong xx

Holly Moore

December 15, 2012 at 3:11 PM

Actually, the title was the first line. So, I re-named it, and added the first line back in. I got confused when posting. We both caught it! Thanks, Hugs...Holly

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