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Up and Down We Go

Travel Does not change theme Up and down, we go far Coming back from where we began Need Map ©Holly P. Moore December 2012

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Date: 12/18/2012 2:58:00 PM
a sense of direction, we all need, well written poetry like this too...
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:33:00 AM
I really like this one too. I just adore a well written succinct poem.
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Date: 12/16/2012 8:53:00 AM
I like this! The part of not changing theme is thought provoking - sometimes in life we move to other places claiming a change of scene but what we're really doing is running away from ourselves. Nicely penned!
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Date: 12/16/2012 7:26:00 AM
Holly oh been there many a time, I like this a lot...David
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Date: 12/16/2012 3:32:00 AM
Yes I like this and I think the change of title is a good idea this works, no matter how far we think we go sometimes we seem to end up back where we started sometimes a little direction is a good idea xx
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Date: 12/15/2012 2:21:00 PM
That could've been me .... I have no sense of location .... lol Well written dear Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/15/2012 1:27:00 PM
Hi Holly love, this is good but I think you may be a line short for a Cinquain, have a look and let me know if I am wrong xx
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Date: 12/15/2012 3:11:00 PM
Actually, the title was the first line. So, I re-named it, and added the first line back in. I got confused when posting. We both caught it! Thanks, Hugs...Holly