Up Above

the sun
    journeying
through
the heavens:
an early
  appearance of the moon
at dusk:
a star
   so bright,
birds
  in flight,
the night..
the night..
love
 poured
    down...
...
to surround..
and
change
a world below
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 12, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Beautiful. Peaceful. A favorite :)
Strand Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 11:26 AM
You are too kind Heidi,thanks
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December 12, 2018 at 5:31 AM
This is beautiful, Brian! The appearance of the star changes the ordinary into extraordinary!
Strand Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Indeed it does Kim,thanks
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