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… Feeling weak Face in the mud No deeper can you fall This really is the bottom A crowd has gathered round But helping hands are none They came to stare and judge To nourish on your sorrow What happened matters not Just know that you’re forgiven I know that you can rise Enough strength you were given Think of a tiny seed That cracks a concrete slab No deeper can you fall The only way is UP …

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 2:59:00 PM

Miroslaw, thank you for the reply..PD

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/26/2014 12:15:00 PM

Thoughtful inspiring write..:)!!! Nice one..:)

Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 5/21/2016 6:12:00 AM

A late but grateful thank you!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/26/2014 8:40:00 AM

Hi , Miroslaw, this is such an inspirational write! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Warmest regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2014 1:39:00 AM

Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win

Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 6/26/2014 4:41:00 AM

Thanks :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/25/2014 11:42:00 PM

Miroslaw,, Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA

Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 6/26/2014 4:42:00 AM

Thanks :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/16/2014 6:43:00 PM

Beautiful Miroslaw....Very inspiring my friend...Tim

Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 6/17/2014 4:26:00 PM

Glad you liked it Tim. Hope it resonates with ones who happen to be "on the bottom" in some way. M.E.