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Mind made up
Car packed up
Sun rose up
Road stretched up
Winds pick up
Feet speed up
Dreams stay up
Worries fade up
Shadows drift up
Stars light up
No turning up
Freedom holds up
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Treacher Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 9:51 AM
I love the repetition here in what you've made up! It cheered me up!
Delegans Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 7:48 AM
Haha, thank you. Appreciate the kind words.
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