Unzipped Lips

''LOVE always hurts when not on the right time when not with the right person when not in the right place and when not at the perfect moment''
i heard noises from nowhere but the clearest voice was yours yeah, love is everywhere but dear, where are you now? i smell the flowers scent but your fragrance lasts longer yeah, love is blind but dear, it is when every sense do become numb. i hate being rejected but i hate most is when you leave me hanging for something that was impossible to have and that is your "LOVE"
> i am too stupid to fell from a person who will never be deserving for my love <
who is numb . . . you my dear that never felt the love i always give without asking anything or me that until now never realize that no matter what i do it is always be an "impossibe" thing to have your sweetest "YES"?
"do i deserve this?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Madonsela Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 11:39 AM
i feel you, there nice piece. Goodluck for the contest. Ronny
D. Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 10:15 AM
no...
Grisetti Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 9:36 AM
I hope you can find the person who does deserve your love. Best of luck in the contest.
Harrell Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 7:55 AM
Ohh, just move on, Jun-Jun. You deserve happiness. Ask God to help you deal with it. Toquyen
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