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Unyielding

Tic toc the winds of time blow all awry
unyielding,   vines not entwined 
thirsting      for peace and love 

Visual #2 

Penned by Seren Roberts on 18/2/2015

Contest: in praise of a kimo contest... Nette Onclaud

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2015

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Debra Squyres Date: 3/19/2015 10:54:00 AM Beautifully done kimo !! Congrats on your win !! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 3/19/2015 6:52:00 PM Thank you Debra....Seren

Casarah Nance Date: 3/13/2015 4:30:00 PM Thirsting for winning poetry, I drink up your write! a very nice win for you ! :) Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 3/19/2015 6:53:00 PM Thx. Cas, wasn't too sure of it, glad Nette liked it ....Seren

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/13/2015 2:06:00 PM Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 3/19/2015 6:54:00 PM Thank you Debbie ....Seren

Jan Allison Date: 3/13/2015 7:53:00 AM This is very beautiful Seren many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/22/2015 1:17:00 AM This entry is beautiful Seren! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 3/19/2015 6:55:00 PM Connie thank you for stopping by....Seren

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2015 11:25:00 PM Also, I really enjoyed your contest you just finished! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 2/17/2015 11:48:00 PM Thank you again Andrea, all the poems entered were excellent, thought I was going daft when the title of the first was pointed out to me. Because I was determined to be firm about errors like that, I was mortified omg I thought here I go advocating keep to the rules and I had made this mess Was with relief I read a message from Debbie apologising and saying she had changed it.... Seren

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2015 11:23:00 PM It's so nice to see everyone's "take" on these pictures and to see which picture they are drawn to. WEll done, Seren. (blow instead of blows). Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 2/17/2015 11:42:00 PM Thank you Andrea, have altered as you suggested lol its is 5 am here so maybe am allowed a grammatical error ... Seren