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Unyielding

Tic toc the winds of time blow all awry unyielding, vines not entwined thirsting for peace and love Visual #2 Penned by Seren Roberts on 18/2/2015 Contest: in praise of a kimo contest... Nette Onclaud

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Debra Squyres

Date: 3/19/2015 10:54:00 AM

Beautifully done kimo !! Congrats on your win !!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2015 6:52:00 PM

Thank you Debra....Seren

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/13/2015 4:30:00 PM

Thirsting for winning poetry, I drink up your write! a very nice win for you ! :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2015 6:53:00 PM

Thx. Cas, wasn't too sure of it, glad Nette liked it ....Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2015 2:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2015 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Debbie ....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 7:53:00 AM

This is very beautiful Seren many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/22/2015 1:17:00 AM

This entry is beautiful Seren!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2015 6:55:00 PM

Connie thank you for stopping by....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2015 11:25:00 PM

Also, I really enjoyed your contest you just finished!

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/17/2015 11:48:00 PM

Thank you again Andrea, all the poems entered were excellent, thought I was going daft when the title of the first was pointed out to me. Because I was determined to be firm about errors like that, I was mortified omg I thought here I go advocating keep to the rules and I had made this mess Was with relief I read a message from Debbie apologising and saying she had changed it.... Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2015 11:23:00 PM

It's so nice to see everyone's "take" on these pictures and to see which picture they are drawn to. WEll done, Seren. (blow instead of blows).

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/17/2015 11:42:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, have altered as you suggested lol its is 5 am here so maybe am allowed a grammatical error ... Seren