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Unyielding

Tic toc the winds of time blow all awry
unyielding,   vines not entwined 
thirsting      for peace and love 

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Penned by Seren Roberts on 18/2/2015

Contest: in praise of a kimo contest... Nette Onclaud

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Debra Squyres

March 19, 2015 at 10:54 AM

Beautifully done kimo !! Congrats on your win !!

Seren Roberts

March 19, 2015 at 6:52 PM

Thank you Debra....Seren

Casarah Nance

March 13, 2015 at 4:30 PM

Thirsting for winning poetry, I drink up your write! a very nice win for you ! :)

Seren Roberts

March 19, 2015 at 6:53 PM

Thx. Cas, wasn't too sure of it, glad Nette liked it ....Seren

Debbie Guzzi

March 13, 2015 at 2:06 PM

Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love

Seren Roberts

March 19, 2015 at 6:54 PM

Thank you Debbie ....Seren

Jan Allison

March 13, 2015 at 7:53 AM

This is very beautiful Seren many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

February 22, 2015 at 1:17 AM

This entry is beautiful Seren!

Seren Roberts

March 19, 2015 at 6:55 PM

Connie thank you for stopping by....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2015 at 11:25 PM

Also, I really enjoyed your contest you just finished!

Seren Roberts

February 17, 2015 at 11:48 PM

Thank you again Andrea, all the poems entered were excellent, thought I was going daft when the title of the first was pointed out to me. Because I was determined to be firm about errors like that, I was mortified omg I thought here I go advocating keep to the rules and I had made this mess Was with relief I read a message from Debbie apologising and saying she had changed it.... Seren