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Unwritten Absence

Why don't I feel your absence? A painful absence that should tear at my soul Why don't I feel your absence? A suffocating absence that should consume my breath Why? I reach out Hoping to hold you But my hands grasp at thin air Leaving me lost and feeling small Reminding me... Unspoken words Unwritten absence Unexpressed thoughts Are all I have Because you aren't here.

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Date: 9/29/2023 3:34:00 AM
Unexpressed thoughts are all you have because now all that you can feel is empty air … feeling of loss so well expressed here i really felt those emotions youve written here so effortlessly! Poignant and touching take that fits the theme of the prompt. Those opening lines too stood out for me. A fave for me. Congratulations on winning
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Date: 9/28/2023 1:29:00 PM
Nice take on the contest and welcome to PS Chi
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