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Love is an unwritten absence from the scripted page It's the whispered confession spoken in the unmeasurable realm between the eyes of lovers as they cross the bridge beyond written words where the beating heart of two sparrows are caught in the winds of love as they travel through the invisible paradise of shared elixer that intoxicates the blood and brain to become a formless, shapeless living thing Where passion is weaned on expectations and weighed by the soul as to its substance of whether it is worthy to be a precious gift of beauty beyond any measure...to be called love Only then can words be written in poetic script upon the page

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Date: 9/29/2023 3:37:00 AM
I love those opening lines and the ending in this poem so much! So profound and well articulated with brilliant wordplay! I especially loved “ cross the bridge beyond written words” “ formless shapeless living thing” “ written in poetic script” brilliant write. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on winning
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Date: 9/19/2023 4:05:00 AM
Such a beautiful, well written romantic poem Frederic. So many wonderful lines,’ Love is an unwritten absence from the scripted page,’’ as they travel through the invisible paradise.’. Just glorious. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/18/2023 6:11:00 PM
"Where passion is weaned on expectations and weighed by the soul" very nice Frederick. Hoping you are well my friend.
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Date: 9/18/2023 5:36:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Frederick! … It's the whispered confession spoken in the unmeasurable realm between the eyes of lovers
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